Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Treatment 1st draft: Darryl's POV

My story takes the point of view of Darryl, Marcus' best friend, during his time trapped in jail with the DHS.


The story starts out with Darryl waking up alone in his room, dazed and confused about where he is. He's injured and hurt because of his accident when the sirens went off. From here Darryl has sporadic flashbacks of what has happened; the sirens wailing, the millions of people running, getting stabbed, and his friends and him getting captured by the DHS.


As he recalls all of these memories, he starts crying realizing that he's alone and hurt with none of his friends around. From here, the severe haircut lady calls him out and brings him to the interrogation room. There he experiences his first interrogation with no torture because he is injured. They ask him many questions about his friends and why he was on the street at the time of the accident. Darryl can't recall exactly what happened, but he tells them why they weren't in school in the first place, and then remembers that Marcus is the reason all of this has happened to him. He begins to feel feelings of anger towards Marcus, but then goes through various flashbacks reminding him of his life long friendship with him. He then gets interrogated by the severe haircut lady and decides to protect Marcus and his friendship.

He later on develops a friendship with a fellow prisoner named Zeb. Together they devise a plan to escape their jail. However, Darryl gets left behind and only Zeb makes it out.

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