Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Writing Tips

Sam:
-The flow of the slides is and excellent component in your web site and one of your strong suits.
-For a suggestion you might want to add a conclusion page at the bottom where the rest of your links are located
-While reading through your project I found not a lot of spelling errors or grammar mistakes which is a good sign
-This is an excellent topic to write about but maybe add your personal connection as another page

Mike S
-Great interpretation of what facebook actually looks like and what the media is thinking about facebook
-Maybe add a page of all the social networking sites and discuss how as a whole how they are affecting the future workers of America
-The new innovative ideas page is a big plus and hopefully you could expand on this more in the conclusion

Jack
-This is a great topic to write about and certainly is a hot debate between high schoolers around the country
-In the future ask a girl about their perspective of this topic so the page would draw more attention
-Possibly add a page of how the parents feel about this topic as well
-Overall a good site which might recive more recongnition in future.

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