Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Helpful Adivce/Tips on Linear

FOR KELLI, JACK, AND REMY

Kelli!
It looks to me that you already fixed your linear page! It looks great! Everything is clear and concise, and you didn't overdue the page. You switched the essay up a little with transitional words, as well, to contribute to the essay format. WELL DONE! :)

Jack!
I think you are working on uploading a linear style page to your site. My advice to you would be make sure it is legible and not overdone. The rest of your site is great, so just make sure the essay part actually flows correctly! :)

Remy!
So, I found the linear version hard to find, but other than that it's great. The simplicity is kept with the background color and use of black font, while making it still a little classy with the typographic header. The content is great, and your website is a success and CUTE:). (sad too lol) :)

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