There is no linear version of your hypertext on your website. To improve this i would suggest that you go through your project and read through it, converting it into a linear essay. On your website the linear version should be easily distinguishable from the background and easy to read over or scan through.
AJ:
You also have no linear version of your project. I would suggest to you the same thing that I suggested to Sam.
Nelson:
The linear version of your web site it good. However, it is hard to read in the format it is in. I would suggest that you change the text color to black and the background to white. Also, you should make the text box more narrow so it is easier to read. Other than that your linear version is good, I would just change the design of the linear version to make it more reader friendly.
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