revised bitstrips

In my first attempt at making a comic on bitstrips.com I thought I was missing some key components in this to make the story flow with some humor involved. In my revised comic I added the component that Marcus is acting as a mature adult while he has some traits that are still childish. He acts more like he is an experienced adult where he drinks coffee regularly and also seems to like to taste of alcohol and likes to drink alcohol occasionally. For my first comic I would give myself a low "B" because I had most of my ideas in the comic but I was missing the conclusion that would bring the main idea to the reader. Now that I added some finishing touches that makes the comic understandable I would give myself an "A-" because I have a good idea and it flows throughout the comic.