I added 3 new lines to my original comic strip. In my second attempt, I tried to emphasize my main point of what would happen if the government was looking for terrorists, but rather found other types of venial crimes. This strip shows people in line to be seen by the police explaining their irrelevant crimes and wondering where they are going. Eventually, those in charge realize that the economy cannot handle that many people being taken out of society and that they have no place to put all these criminals. The final two frames show an alternate to overcrowded jails (internment camps... they've happened before) and then finally a large crowd of diverse people being united over their hate and frustration with the government in their shared jail cell.
I would have given myself a B on the first comic because I did put a lot of effort into, but I did not entirely finish portraying the thought I started. I think the second comic I made deserves an A because I doubled the amount length of the comic in order to fully portray the idea and message that the first draft started. This final draft shows my original idea, has humor, and also brings the idea around full circle and shows the big picture outcome.
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