remix touch up

After last class I wanted to touch up my longer remix of little brother and add more of the theme representation of racial profiling into the letter while he is held captive. I added a scene in the letter where Darryl speaks with another inmate who is of Arabic descent and what troubles he is going through physically and mentally. I wanted Darryl to come up with his own theories of why the government is doing this and making him think about his own government. This might show Darryl maturing into thinking about radical ideas that his peers are also thinking about as well. I tried to add the event of 9/11 into the letter which is always being compared in the book. I think now this is in the A region because before I didn't add much presence of any theme in my first try at this remix and now it is prevlent and making an letter from Darryl in prision to the outside world I thought was a very cleaver idea. I will probably use this theme to develop a topic to come up with. http://http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/nscharffenberger/remixbro.html