I completely rethought my first Bit Strip and came up with a new idea for my re-do. Instead of just showing part of the story everyone has already read about, I decided to show a part of the story nobody read about, what was happening at home when Marcus was being detained. I believe my first Bit Strip was probably deserving of a low B. It had a clear connection to the material, and the events flowed, but it wasn't very creative. I think this Bit Strip is in the low A's. It has a clear connection to the material, flows and makes sense, and shows another aspect of the book not previously explored.
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