The difference between my first and second comic strips is that my second includes what Marcus was doing the night before, showing his passion for the game, and the priorities he has. I think my old grade would have been a B, because it conveyed the message simply, but it didn't have enough substance to it or show enough about what the character cares about. Now I think the strip is an A because anyone who has read the book understands the portrayal and appreciates the humor.
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