For my revised Bitstrip comic, I decided to make a complete change of my previous comic and focused more on the theme of privacy. The beginning of my comic follows the actual storyline by showing how the Department of Homeland Security took away Winston's privacy. Winston's argument with his dad also follows the actual storyline with Winston getting angry at the fact that his dad is basically ok with his right to privacy being taken away because he thinks it's his duty and that it will make him safe. My contribution is the dad actually facing the consequences of him having his privacy taken away as seen through him being followed on the street and even into the bathroom. I think my comic deserves a grade within the A- range because I am very knowledgeable on the actual text but was still able to add my own original contribution. My comic is also very clear and shows how well I have mastered Bitstrips Comics.