Captured

Here is my revised comic. I basically redid it because my first one completely lacked originality... I tried to do an alternate ending type of thing in which Marcus actually hands over his phone. I think my first comic was probably between a C+ and B-. This one I think would range between a B+ and A-.

My comic life strip focuses on the way Marcus's life would be without technology. Although he would at first miss his advanced technological gadgets, he would soon probably realize that his life would be a whole lot easier without them! I think that my comic life strip would get a B+ or A-.