REVISED BITSTRIP:
For my second Bitstrip, I made my comic more concise by using less wording and fewer frames. I felt like my first Bitstrip was vague and didn't really focus much on a significant aspect of the literature. However, the Bitstrip above displays Marcus' personality and highlights his habit of annoyingly repeating the same question when being asked something. A similar situation occurred when severe hair cut lady asked Marcus to unlock his phone and he wouldn't answer her question.
Even though this is a low-stakes assignment and if this were being graded, I would give myself a B+ for my second draft comic strip. I would give my first draft a B- because I could have focused on a more significant scene or theme. Also, my first comic strip could have a stronger connection to the literature.
COMIC LIFE:
The comic above depicts the paradox of the false positive and the change in the police's ability to accurately find terrorists. Before the attack, the police did not heavily question U.S. citizens or suspect them of being terrorists. Therefore, the U.S. citizens blend into society and the appearance of a terrorist (or gorilla) is more prominent. This trust that the police had with the identities of their citizens disappeared as soon as the attack occurred. After the attack, the police question almost every U.S. citizen even if they are not doing something questionable or unusual. Depicted in the bottom frame of my comic, the U.S. citizens are seen as terrorists (or gorillas) in the eyes of the police. Therefore, it is harder to tell which gorilla is the REAL gorilla and not a U.S. citizen mistakingly depicted as gorillas.
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